Another great poem. i have to say that i konw i've already said this to you but i remember just less then a year ago you struggled making these types of styles and always said you got stuck. i'm happy that you've been able to do them since then. it's exciting seeing these styles come from you.

~Jacklyn

I loved it Holly, I always have to write about 100 words to get my point across, I admire the way you can say so much in just a few words, it speaks highly of your ability as a writer, but a human being as well. Love, Tim

Wow! there seems no end to oyur talent, Holly! this is a completely different perspective to fear.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Wow, awesome nonet! The flow was incredible, just rolled off my tongue from start to finish. Perfect wording and love the last line, excellent way to finish it off!

You have the talent to deliver a clear and powerful message in the different styles of formed poetry. Another excellent job!