by holly May 30, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
All day i stare at you and at night i dream of your beautiful face |
by Sean Allen
"your the love of my life and the guy I'm never gonna get" |
That poem is great... still i think your other poem was better... you are very talented.... you write amazing... |
by Summer
Great poem, the only reason it didnt get a 5 is because it it flowed in some places and others it didn't. Another thing I thought would make the poem better was instead of having the names at the top (almost like the name of the poem) including it in a line would help the flow some. |