Great poem, the only reason it didnt get a 5 is because it it flowed in some places and others it didn't. Another thing I thought would make the poem better was instead of having the names at the top (almost like the name of the poem) including it in a line would help the flow some.

That poem is great... still i think your other poem was better... you are very talented.... you write amazing...

"your the love of my life and the guy I'm never gonna get"
you're, not 'your'
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"but ill always love you no matter what life puts me through
so stay my friend cause i cant live without you"
"but i love you to bits and ill always be there for you
ill do all i can to help and ill love you for all time"
I'll, can't
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"Andy, your my netball coach and friend, 100 per cent hottie"
"your funny and cool, i respect you a heap"
"your younger and together we will never be"
you're, not 'your'
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"but that's no what i really want"
'not', not 'no'
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Meh, nevermind. Needless to say, there are plenty of grammatical corrections for you to make, and I think it would actually make a slight difference.

As far as the content of the poem goes, I really enjoyed the attention to personal details and the unobtrusive rhyming.