HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry for my language =P... this poem was way to amazing... it was soo great. im completely honestly speachless... it was.. beautiful. the flow was beautiful... the meaning was... wow... its just.. yeah you know.. its "stunning". anyways to bad i cant give you more then a 5... cuz this poem definately diserves more then a 5... -Jen-

Wow..I love, love dark poems. Yours ryhmed and flowed perfectly adn was wonderful. I loved this part: 'Her lips read this silent call for help
Good God, this world should burn in hell
We can never listen with ignorant ears
Alas, Now I understand her fears' I thought it has so much feeling and emotion.