Science and Nature (Tanka)

Simply Beautiful!

A greater beauty exists
when one looks past the surface.
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I loved those lines! They were great. here's not much to say about this one, Cause of the format. But you did do a great job on it I think. =D 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

You really have a great talent in writing poems. this poem is amazing, i love it.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Wind, hmm it's so unexplainable. I'm not quite sure the Tanka format, so I am guessing you got this one right. lol
But for the contents of the poem. I liked the idea of the wind, it had a 'calm' feeling to it. :P