by Cristela Quiroz May 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
When you first approached me I wasnt interested and didnt want a relationship, |
by Corruption
This is good i like that u found happyness and i am glad that u have writen such a great piece:D but to add one more simple sentence i would like to thank u for the comment u left me i guess a couple monthes ago:D |
by LadyPearl
Good job, one suggestion, try to shorten your lines, it'll be easier to read |
Wow baby that was a damn wounderful but true pome i love ya babe |