Comments : Burdens

  • 18 years ago

    by Meggie33

    That poem was really deep, i really enjoyed it! great job!

    now, i just thought i would metion, that that poem could both lean towards being a poem about a lost friendship -OR- about a lost relationship!

    I really liked the style and flow, good job gurl!

    **meggie**

  • 18 years ago

    by colby

    Omg is this bout adam?? hun i know u love him, but if he cant see what he is doing to u and he dont love u the way u should b then he is not worth yr time! one day he is gonna cum back and want what he left behind but its ur chose if ur gonna let him back in!!
    luv koda!xoxox