by Joy May 30, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
**Another English class poem...had to write about Titanic people...my teacher liked the rhyming in this one...** |
by Darien
There was something about this poem I didn't like. I think you should have added more detail. I've read about the Titanic, and Thomas Andrews, so I know a few things. The Titanic didn't sink fast, it actually took about 3 hours to sink. Add more details. Anyone can watch the movie and write about it. Show us your research, show us you know more. |