by Kristina May 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm broken and torn, |
by LovelyDivine
This is a great song. It sounds like something I would have just written recently. 5/5 |
by hayley
I loved it....im adding u 2 my faves list. i love ur work! mostly cause i realate to pretty much everything u write.... |
by Chris
I like thiss alot...you have alot of sad poems but they ofcourse are very stron and powerful I like your style.Keep writing. |
Beautifully executed and very original, yet still quite easy to relate to. Perfectly written lyrics. This couldn't have been better... Unless, of course, there was music. This could easily be a good song -- almost like something you'd hear at Warped Tour. You might want to look into getting someone in a band to work on making it a finished piece for you, like I've done with some of my lyrics. |
by AnnMarie
Good poem slash song! It flowed nicely......you don't happen to play music too?? |