"We looked into each others eyes," should be others', to get the ownership concept across.

Moving on after the end of a relationship is something almost everyone has to go through. I don't know if the poem is still applicable, ie iono if this was a recent event, but if it was, I don't think you should worry too much, things will start moving again.

This is sad, and it's really good. It kept my attention and has a good flow.

Great job!
5/5

I agree with Sean Allen up there! Keep your head up!! You can only get left behind if you stop trying to keep up. nice poem.

Great job on this poem deciding who the winners were was difficult! thanks :-) 5/5

KurMiT