Wow this is really good. i like this a lot. you did a wonderful job writing it. cause really are a great writer. keep it up 5/5

-shivers-

Ohhhhh...mmmyyyy gooood.
That was awsome. I rarely EVER vote (it kinda makes my vote mean something, doesn't it? lol) but i give that a 5. Really. It made me shiver!