You are really talented. Y'know that? I loved this poem, the rythym and the flow and wording choice stood out the most though. I seriously am in love with this poem. I like it. ^_^
♥ Megan

This poem has amazing imagery in it. Very well written. No complaints really. Great poem!

Wow.. you are a very talented writer! this was very good.. i loved how dark it was, it really made an impression on me.. i loved all the comparisons you made.. and i just loved the poem! great job! 5/5

You have the creepiest dreams ever, at least you use them to make some interesting poems, keep up the good work

"The trees begin to rust."
trees don't rust, but whatever
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"The wind cut's at the skin."
you don't need the apostrophe in 'cuts'
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I liked the rhythm and rhyming, though the first stanza had a different rhythm than the other stanzas. The juxtaposition was interesting, and I liked some of the contrasts present.

This was a very strong sturcture and it was really good, greeat imagery there too xxALLYxx