Comments : I lay still in the heat of it all.

  • 18 years ago

    by Naj

    Thats good

  • 18 years ago

    by dorothy

    You really are a great writter 4 peoms.
    great job i really like you. i hope we become friends.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxBloodxXxDreamsxX

    Thats really great!! Very good poem!! U have alot of great poems!!!

    Jess