Lantern

by erratic hippie   May 31, 2006


Lantern

With the sultry silhouette of an hourglass
And a sturdy soldier's helmet, it begs
Attention. It feigns weakness,
Lighting your path only so far
(so as to keep you close).
A dreamy gaze lets know
That, in fact, it fears the darkness
As much as you do.

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i feel like i haven't submitted a poem in ages...so i just nabbed one from my chapbook to fill my self-imposed quota till the Muses get my apology letter and i'm able to write a new one --- this piece is about an oil lantern . ...and yes it IS under love poems...don't tell me your heart's not reaching out to this poor inanimate object! why, it's practically an Ikea commercial! and i- *sigh*...i already know i'm a kook, no need to remind me

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  • 18 years ago

    by perkyshadowgirl

    I really like the imagery in this one :)
    and the last line is like a "woah" moment
    nice :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Anne

    Whow awesome poem, great use of words!! it was touching and sophisticated at the same time!!! Loved it..
    Xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Wip lost the Rhythm

    I love it !

    flawless and beautiful not corny or anything!!! perfect and a totaly unique idea i don't know what else to say!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Intresting it is diffrent and it gives me ideas for new things as far as the style I liked it and I love the the last two lines I never thought of writing poetry in this way its wonderful

  • 18 years ago

    by erratic hippie

    You. never. cease. to. amaze. me.