by Bridgette May 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I know I shouldn't be doing this |
by mossgirl19
I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work. |
by Just Wishes
Still trying to beat. a simple poem with great feelings. |
This is really a very nice poem, full of sadness which could be felt from every single word mentioned..great write indeed |
This is a really good poem, I loved the last two lines, and the whole poem is beautifully sad. Good job! 5/5 |
This poem is very powerful and well written, but I'd suggest not using 'thoughts' at the end of 2 lines in the same stanza :) Nice poem though x |