WOW! i thought that was absolutely amazing! you are a truly fantastic and very talented writer! that was so powerful, and the descriptions were just so perfect, and it just flowed so well! i really loved this.. brilliant work! 10/5!

This poem is very powerful and well written, but I'd suggest not using 'thoughts' at the end of 2 lines in the same stanza :) Nice poem though x

This is a really good poem, I loved the last two lines, and the whole poem is beautifully sad. Good job! 5/5

This is really a very nice poem, full of sadness which could be felt from every single word mentioned..great write indeed

all the best and take care
5/5

Still trying to beat. a simple poem with great feelings.

regards

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.