Awww.... that is so sad.. You did a great job at expressing your emotions on this. It's very sad and powerful, and gives a strong message of how relationships can sometimes ruin your relationship with your family. I'm really sorry that you are going through this. But this is a really good poem. I hope that you are ok! 5/5***

This is tottaly what i am going through right now.... wow how is your boy taking it though? i love how you tottaly expressed your feelings and still made it sound amazing you have so much talent!

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

Very sad poem! I dont no what I would do in that kind of situation you wrote it so nicely i loved it! Like Stephanie and Laura said you have so much talent! you really do!! well this is the last of my comments! *tear* but i shall be comming back to comment on more of your amazing work keep it up!!

KurMiT

I hope you dont stop writing anytime soon because if you stop you are wasting the talent you have. Anybody can write a poem, but not everyone can write a Great Poem.

-ifihide