by Wasted Fake Smiles May 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
He takes her hand in his, as he pulled her to him, |
by IfIhide11
This poems is wonderful. It's beauitful. Congrads on the contest, you deserved it. |
Ack the poem that won my contest lol I LOVED IT seriously! you did a great job on it and there was nothing wrong with it, its perfect!! *smiling* well had to let you no!! great job 5/5 |
This poem was great... good job keep it up.... |
Very nice poem, this is really good. I love the flow, and the rhymes. I don't really think there is anyting you can do to improve it:D |
by LadyPearl
That is so sad!! Good Poem |