by Absinth Eyes May 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Cold air grows stale before me |
by Driver
This one was good as well. its deep in thought, and i really enjoyed it. the ending was a little rocky, but overall good. |
Nice strong vocab and imagery but I didn't find it as strong as the other two and for me the ending fell a little flat. |
by ScarletHaze
A good write the words you use are well fitting and powerful x |
by SaveMe?
Wow great poem so powerful i love all of the words you put in there |