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by Lemon May 31, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about death
She thought about the knife She thought about her wrist She thought about her life She felt like she was in hell From the memories she had Now she wanted to escape to a better land Then she lay there Frozen and pale And blood everywhere Her funeral was empty As her spirit rose Her life was no more She wanted to be loved Now its too late To the side she\'s been shoved As her memories faded away She had found the light Now her life is no more delayed
by SaveMe?
Cool rhyming structure great poem i liked it =] greatwork keep it up 5/5 lovelove Alice xxxxxx
by smile
Wow deep poem really sad i love it great stuff 5/5 **smile**