Wow nice and simple... i like short lines but meaningful.. well done...

This is a GREAT poem!!!! good job!

xoxo
ashlie

This is a GREAT poem!!!! good job!

xoxo
ashlie

Awww.. that is really sweet. It portrays the innocence of a baby and the effect they have on you. The flow and rhythm was really good and the short lines had a nice effect on the poem. You did a great job on this! 5/5**

Aww.. that is so sweet! i really loved it, it contained so much love, great descriptions, and really flowed well! excellent write! 5/5

That's a great poem about a child, really nice to read and get the feeling how you feel
well done, keep it up

How Beautiful!! that is definetly the best poem i have ever heard. wow

Aww that is so sweet.. great work 5/5

I loved your poem, it's so sweet and tender. The rhyming was good, and it kept my attention.

Great job! 5/5

A wonderful poem, really captures the innocence and vulnerability of a child, great use of words. keep writing :)

-biscuit-

Kayleigh --
This was SO good! Why don`t you have more poetry? You`re a great writer! The flow and rhyming worked out well, and the longer stanzas added a nice twist. Most people don`t do that. The theme wasn`t vague, and I totally understood the intent. I can even relate to this! It was great. Write some more poems, and let me know! I`ll read them =D

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood