12th of September

by lauren   May 31, 2006


On the 12 of September 3 people died,
All the people who new them well drowned there hearts in tears and cried.
It's so sad to think one of them was just 15 years old,
That forever more she will be locked out in the cold.

With just one swerve of the car and their lives were over,
Leaving one more in a severe coma,
To think that some one you saw everyday
Died in a car crash and in the ground they now lay.

It hurts to see people crying around you,
That the rumours of their death were actually true.
But there was so many hurt in pain in so many ways,
Apart of everyone died with them that day.

Its not just that, there was one more person,
She is in a coma now and she will have to learn a lifes' lesson.
We all hope that she makes it and she recovers from the worst,
But if she does how will she feel, her life all of a sudden burst.

Her sister, her best friend and her sisters' boyfriend,
Died that night with memories which wont mend
To think that they have to live through that night for the rest of there lives,
Knowing that she's the only one who's survived.

We give her our sympathy and our love,
That she can be the miracle which exists in a dove.
She is hanging on and hanging on tight,
Surviving this awful event night after night.

She has inspired all and touched their hearts,
She has come from the end and created a new start.
She has hope from us all that she will pull through,
Just think about it, that could easily have been you!

By Lauren Baptie

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Great poem, but maybe go back and fix the critical errors that they put into the poems automatically through apostrophes. And another thing, Life's = Life is, so you don't need an apostrophe. But great poem, i really liked how you expressed it so vividly. It was alive with emotion and imagery. So keep up the great work. 5/5 :)
    -Jenna xo