by lauren May 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
On the 12 of September 3 people died, |
Great poem, but maybe go back and fix the critical errors that they put into the poems automatically through apostrophes. And another thing, Life's = Life is, so you don't need an apostrophe. But great poem, i really liked how you expressed it so vividly. It was alive with emotion and imagery. So keep up the great work. 5/5 :) |