A bit about me

by gemowski   May 31, 2006


As i walk the path of life, i relies how far I've come, I'm not bad or a bum, many things Ive over come.

as a child sometimes were hard as daddy beat mummy on our back yard.

but those were the days back in the past, and my oh my did i get here fast.

I'm 20 years old now oh how i feel, i wish i was a child again playing a Field.

when i was Young i was never alone untill mummy started getting pissed and stoned.

my mum use to be the best, but now shes just a pissed up mess i only wish she could once again be at her best.

me and my siblings are all fully grown and two of us have even left home.

mummy's a bit better but still like a beer, but never again will i shed a tear.

oh it seems strange how much Ive grown, I'll soon be paying for my own home.

not much longer till I'm a mum and how i cant wait for that day to come.

but for now I'll sit and write this piece cause day by day time drifts away.

this isn't my best work i think i need to improve the ending slightly comment would be great if any of you would like to leave one

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    A poem of moving on , good but check the spelling, it can sometimes confuse the reader

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Gemma you are a wonderful person and a great friend, you survived and I just might but I still dought that much of the time, I don't think I'll live to see 20 (by the way I think there are some typos but I might be wrong read over it again to make sure)