by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG May 31, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
**Kind of crappy, but i will edit it later. Please vote and comment and give me some advice on how i can make it better! :) ** |
by sarah
Astonishing! wonderful poem the difference between the two and still friends. i love how you wrote that the thought in it was well put. your words kept an amazing flow. and i couldn't help but notice how you compared your self to a mystery. many of us are like that and sometimes we cant let ourselves be too closed in. but being too open can also spin us for a wirl. |
I liked the clarity, the feeling, the imagery, the structure and the story of the poem. 5/5 Great poem but I have always been impressed with your poetry. |