I liked the clarity, the feeling, the imagery, the structure and the story of the poem. 5/5 Great poem but I have always been impressed with your poetry.

Astonishing! wonderful poem the difference between the two and still friends. i love how you wrote that the thought in it was well put. your words kept an amazing flow. and i couldn't help but notice how you compared your self to a mystery. many of us are like that and sometimes we cant let ourselves be too closed in. but being too open can also spin us for a wirl.
take care!