Comments : Needle through my heart

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    I love it I think you did an awesome job with it.

    xoxoxo Haley

  • 18 years ago

    by TeRi LuVz JuAn 4eVeR

    I really liked your poem...it was really nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    Wow this is truely amazing... I hope you get through everything!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. This was a great poem! Loved the whole thing, I can't pick a fav stanza. Keep it up, And keep smiling. =] 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by stranger than most

    Those thoughts are what make it a exerlent poem good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lendell

    Its a beautiful but sad poem. i love it. wonderful poem. i give it a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lendell

    Its a beautiful but sad poem. i love it. wonderful poem. i give it a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Zita

    I loved it!It was simply amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Breath of fresh air with this one...its so hurtful and emotional that you feel it through the words. I love it.

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaunaMarie

    One word... awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlynn

    NO no this is beautiful. I felt all the feeling wrote down here. I love it. 5/5 for you. Keep it up
    Check mine out please.
    Midnight

  • 18 years ago

    by DaddysLittlePrincess

    I really like this its really good keep it up!

    much love*

  • 18 years ago

    by angel

    Very excellent good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Em

    I loved this, it made me cry (slightly embarrassing cos im in the library). There were some really good emotions and words that you used and I loved that it was about something that most people can relate to. :) I love stanzas 8 and 9:
    "I would have kissed away
    Every falling tear
    I would have held you in my arms
    Forever near

    I'd never let anyone hurt you
    I'd stand in there way
    And if you ever asked
    You know I'd stay"

    I really love your writing. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Oh Sweet Calamity

    Its really great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's very heartfelt... one can understand it came stright from your heart... Amazing poem... Great stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's very heartfelt... one can understand it came stright from your heart... Amazing poem... Great stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Disturbed Poet

    I love this....it sounds so sincere and like it was written for me.....good writing style and amazing wording...

  • 18 years ago

    by Keshia

    I think it was really good i liked it alot basically how i feel GOOD JOB!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by i love danny

    Ok wow that was real god but yeah i know how youy fel that happened to me with my x abraham and ya so email me bac or comment one of my poems pleze cuz it would b nice to talk to someone that knows exactly how i feel so pleze it would mean alot wel bi