by LockedInEternity May 31, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
**I know this is really long, but please read it and tell me what you think:):)** |
by Allison
This was another really good one. I love the topic, its one that I like to write about. Keep up the good work. |
by Elynnka
That was an amazing poem! Really makes you think. I love the concept behind the story. You're a good writer, don't waste this talent =) |
by Robie Lincer
Wow you got the imagination goin in this poem!!!! when i was reading it i went deep in the poem, with the flow and the words u used! |
Wow...awsome once again!!!! this poem gives me the chills also!! a 5/5 for me!! |
Wow. Just...Wow. Lol. I loved it. =) The flow was excellent, and it stayed all the way through the poem. The rhymes seemed a little easy though. I'm sure you could do better. I also liked the idea of the Devil taking your life in general. Very creative. =) 5/5 xoxo |