The kid who commit suicide

by Untamed   May 31, 2006


A kid in my school died.
He was only 15 and living his life.

It was one Sunday morning,
He was going insane,
He didn`t want to live,
and think of his decision again.

He made his choice
Of how he would die
He didn`t even smile
Laugh or cry.

He got high on the most highest drug
and left the house without even a hug.
He had family problems, I`m taking a guess
and no one knew he would put his problem to rest

He walked to the train station
at 5:00 o clock in the night
He just gave up
and wasn`t willing to fight

He jumped on the tracks
and walked to wards the train
as it slammed his body
He felt no pain

He died at the spot
A really smart boy
But i guess life used him
Just like a toy

Students found out that very next Monday
How he killed himself on that horrible Sunday

Many cried
Some from the inside
They remembered Freddie,
the kid who commit suicide.

R.I.P
Freddie R.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow!!! VERY Nice Poem...and so sad...Once happened 2 a kid in my School..but so sad...keep IT UP!!!!! Stop by and checkout my Poems! Hit me Bakk!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    But i guess life used him
    Just like a toy
    {loved those lines}

    This poem is sooo sad...it is soo... heartbreaking...you described it perfectly and clearly..the rhyming was okay...the flow was excellent...i gave it a 5/5..i like your work i must say...keep it up!!
    and Keep smiling :)

    btw thx 4 the comment.