Comments : The kid who commit suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    But i guess life used him
    Just like a toy
    {loved those lines}

    This poem is sooo sad...it is soo... heartbreaking...you described it perfectly and clearly..the rhyming was okay...the flow was excellent...i gave it a 5/5..i like your work i must say...keep it up!!
    and Keep smiling :)

    btw thx 4 the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow!!! VERY Nice Poem...and so sad...Once happened 2 a kid in my School..but so sad...keep IT UP!!!!! Stop by and checkout my Poems! Hit me Bakk!!!!