This is fantastic....its such a sad subject to write about...but I think this definetly deserves a 5.

This was a great poem... good job!!! Pretty good for a first poem.

Ive been in situations kinda like this before
there not easy

Awes-Wicked Good. ♥ ( :
And Thanx.... ( :
You Did(Do) Help Me.

xoxo

♥Lauren

Aww.. that is so sweet! you must be a really good friend.. this poem had a good flow, great descriptions, and so much emotion! i really loved it.. i think you will definetely get an "A" for this at school.. lol! nice write! 5/5

This has got to be the best poem i have ever read. its really great that you have stopped your friend from continuing with what she did. all she needs is your love and you showing her that she cares. keep up the good work and i hope to see some more poems from you in the future!!

kait

Awww a really nice poem, i love the way it starts off sad but has a happy ending 5/5 good work

Heya hon. i like the way you edited it. i makes more sense now(to me atleast)

xoxo

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xLauren3

This is such a heart-felt poem. pure emotion condensed down into a few words. its overflowing with passion and talent. i love it.

-biscuit-