Really nice poem i like it
good luck

This was pretty good.. although the rhymes were predictable.. maybe you should try not rhyming your poems and instead using more words that describe your emotions more in detail.. good write though.. 3/5

Remember when u read some of your poems to me.. haha.. well i just read that in my head and oddly enough it was like u were reading it to me. pretty intense though.. great poem.
dee

AWWWW..that is soo cute and good...