This was so cute...I think im teary..lol..OMG yup i am there goes a tear now...Well anyways this was really cute and I have a very similar story as well and his name is urs...Not tryin to be corny or anything but it was...Then he moved and thats all I write about anymore...But this was really cute..I loved it!

I like it a lot, i love the last two stanzas. Keep writing and please comment.

lissa

This is a good poem, so filled with emotion.

lol and thanks for the comment. i need something to improve on i guess!

anyway you're a good writer in my mind. keep writing

This is a good poem, so filled with emotion.

lol and thanks for the comment. i need something to improve on i guess!

anyway you're a good writer in my mind. keep writing

I love this stanza:

Hold me together from afar,
And don't forget my name,
Sing to me with your guitar,
And never be ashamed.

Beautiful poem, you have talent!
xoxoxo Haley

ps thank you for your comment

Gr8 job!! i love it!! you're an amazing writer, and i'm sure that your talent surpasses mine so i'm not even gonna ask you to read my poems. you can if you want to tho.
keep up the awesome work!!
~maggie