My Note To God

by Russell   Jun 1, 2006


What if God was standing here,
all the time judging me.
Would I pass his test,
or fail miserably?

Could I honestly say,
If i died tonight,
that I've done the best i can,
and have been living right?

I know father i have sinned in the past,
I've found out what i wish to be,
I know that this is all a test,
cause when stripped bare,that is me

Everything you do is a test,
to make me a better man,
and all the pain i have witnessed,
is another obstacle in your plan

I'm hoping "Good things come to those who wait" is true,
and for a girl who wont hurt me,
Someone to spend time with me until the day comes,
When you will set me free

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow. Very good message. It's good to wait for that one true love. The only mistake I found inthis poem was that in the third stanza there should be a space after the comma.. it's proubly just me, but that way i think the whole poem would look neater and flow/look more smoothy =)

    I really liked this poem =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I loved the message of your poem, it's really deep. You expressed beautifully your questions about God in your life. Great job! 5/5

    Keep writing.

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