I loved the message of your poem, it's really deep. You expressed beautifully your questions about God in your life. Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Wow. Very good message. It's good to wait for that one true love. The only mistake I found inthis poem was that in the third stanza there should be a space after the comma.. it's proubly just me, but that way i think the whole poem would look neater and flow/look more smoothy =)

I really liked this poem =)