by Laura Jun 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Long sleek and filled with life Gliding across the water with strength and ease. Slowing the pace as it reaches murky waters. Ice cold, dark and dreary. Confusion over comes this long graceful ship. Becoming tired but still struggling sinking deeper into the deepness of the icy waters. As the last breath is taken in the final journey is finished. |
That was very well written, and it was great how well you wrote about such a truth, i myself am i huge fan of the story of Titanic. I felt like something was missing though, but it was still very great. Keep up the good work. 4/5 :) |