by Ivan Miller Jun 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I'm not alone anymore, I have her to guide me love me and show what the world has to offer with her in my life, as long as she is there for me I am the strongest man alive, no one can stop me, and that's because I have her love on my side to show me what is right and what is wrong, everyone has someone for them and I know you are the right one for me, you show me everything in a new view, you show me that I am worth having around, and you show me how much a person can really be loved, as long as I have you... |
by struggling
This is a beautiful poem so much love so much emotion so much feeling.Really great poem.5/5 poem. |
by struggling
This is a beautiful poem so much love so much emotion so much feeling.Really great poem.5/5 poem. |
Wowww very nice |
by stargirl49
Awesome job!! hey, criticism is good, justin, but when it comes in little quantities. give him a break, it was really good. |
by donk2ymouth
Interesting poem we have here. You got the point across. You have her to guide you. ha ha. Anyways, this poem would be better if we fixed a few things. It's more in a paragraph form which is a little different than usual, but unorthodoxed poets rock. Anyways, I'm going to re-type the poem in the format I think would best suit it... Hold on this might be a bit long. |