Awww thats nice alot of feeling in it!
lv claire
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Interesting poem we have here. You got the point across. You have her to guide you. ha ha. Anyways, this poem would be better if we fixed a few things. It's more in a paragraph form which is a little different than usual, but unorthodoxed poets rock. Anyways, I'm going to re-type the poem in the format I think would best suit it... Hold on this might be a bit long.

I'm not alone anymore,
I have her to guide me, love me, and show
what the world has to offer with her in my life,
as long as she is there for me I am the strongest man alive,

no one can stop me
that's because I have her love
on my side to show me
what is right and what is wrong,

everyone has someone for them
I know you are the right one for me
you show me everything in a new view
you show me that I am worth having around

you show me how much
a person can really be loved
as long as I have you...
I know I'm not alone because I have you to guide me,

I love you with all my heart and soul
and you show me everything people
should see but don't and I thank god
that he brought you into my life.

I know as long as I have you I'm invincible.

Awesome job!! hey, criticism is good, justin, but when it comes in little quantities. give him a break, it was really good.

Wowww very nice
timehealsallwounds*

This is a beautiful poem so much love so much emotion so much feeling.Really great poem.5/5 poem.
xoxostrugglingxoxo

This is a beautiful poem so much love so much emotion so much feeling.Really great poem.5/5 poem.
xoxostrugglingxoxo