WOW! I love this soooo much. I love the layout you have put it in, the short lines give a great effect. And the rhythm and flow is great! Wow 5/5, keep writing.
- Polly x

WOW- That was awesome and I wouldn't change NETHING! I loved it! keep it up and post some more!!!

Rach ♥

OMG!!! I agree with Rachel..I wouldn't change anything about this. this is a very nice poem. great rythme. great use of words. it's just great!!!

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