I liked the poem. Easy to read, nice flow. It is not that easy to do. Nice job.

That was so simple, it was kind of cute. Great job, not a lot of people can make a poem flow like that. The poor little cabbage eh.. hehe.

Wow amzing..its so simple n yet meaning ful...well it has a gd moral not to go off with strangers. nicely done
5/5
love dia mwaz

I loved this poem the best one ive read yet! Dont worry about what other people say cause this was a really good poem

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Tthats soo cutew!!!! how come i never saw this poem?? its wierd, ive read all of yours soo many times but i hadnt left comments when i thoguh i had.....curious..... but its adorable.
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Lol.. this was a great idea.. I bet your friend loved it.. so refreshing.. Maybe I'll use it as a story, for my children.. Well done. xx