by Nate Jun 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You tell me that you love me. But I found you in bed with my best friend. You say it's not what it looks like. Your playing with my heart agian. I can't take this any more it's time you stopped playing with my heart and get away from me, we should've never started this love we should have just left it alone but no you insisted on playing with my heart aigan an agian never thinking about what you have done. well now we're done an your gone so i can now move on. |
by Brisa
I think you need a little bit more emotion in your poems and it would be better to make it have a rhythm. and a little bit of rhyming.xoxo |