Look inside and see what they hide

by leah   Jun 1, 2006


Love is true
love is bare
but to you everything a scare
love awaits you
and you await it
don't fall for the one you think is fit
look inside and see whats there
do yo see good ?
or do you see bad?
do you see someone you wouldn't like when their mad?
think about this
don't just give it a miss
just because you think there the one for you
doesn't mean that the love is true

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Good poem. You had a lot of great imagery and you tied your ideas together good, but i felt like there was something missing. Please, try to refrain from using "cos"..it's "because". Using shortcuts like that takes away from the poem and it's content, makes the reader focus more on that then what is being read. But good job altogether. 4/5 :)
    -Jenna xo

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