Comments : The world!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    One can't change the world. But one can change himself.
    In the dark room u can lit one candle. It can't bright whole room. But it can show u way. How knows anyother one also lit one more candle, and one by one the whole darkness would be disapeared.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I liked this poem actually. I thought this one was well written So keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Hey, I loved the idea of this poem but The repeation kind of made it hard to read, but over all it was good, i can really relate to your ideas and i agree, i miss how it used to be.

    Much love...
    Steph