Really like this one, can understand that feeling, sometimes you just wanna shout the things you wrote here,
very good poem
keep it up

Aww i liked this one i dont think ive ever read anything like this one...lol
i didnt get it (ur comment) at first but i get it now hehe anyways love it and keep up the good work dont be starger 5/5 always
kate

Yep i know that battle its like you wish you could be back but you dont haha i know it well very nicely written!

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

This is great good repetition again very effective it reminds me of that poem in 10 tings i hate about you, well sort of any way i like this :D xxALLYxx