Unfriendly encounter

by Melissa   Jun 1, 2006


All the cynics light up their cigarettes
and blow smoke at my half eaten heart,
I stupidly laugh at their ugliness
as misery undresses herself in blame,
unaware my own two hands were funny to sin...

Eyes shaped like haunted willow trees
blow haphazardly in the forgotten wind,
cruelty drools off those pathetic tongues
as kindness sticks between pearly white teeth
and I'd love to call those scamps names,
but only fools call fools fools
so maybe I'll just write about their disgrace...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Irish Sweetheart

    Keep Writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    I read and re-read this poem a few times . The wording was so amazing it leaves me speach-less .
    I can't even pick out a favorite part because the whole poem is that dang great .
    Wonderfully written Melissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Brilliantly composed!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    I loved this it had such an airy atmosphere and vibe to it. Brilliant creativity, gorgeous images oooh it was lovely

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Very impressive... I enjoyed your words from start to finish. You have written some wonderful metaphors which. I found this one quite inspirational. Pen and paper at the ready :P