Break the past

by amanda?!   Jun 1, 2006


Tears kept flowing,
even though i was done
so many times pain visited
even though i was fine
i kept rebelling,
even though i found love
i cannot find any bliss
in anything i want

the sun shines through
but its always dark
im covered with sweat
but im cold inside
it bothers me
im lost inside

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  • 18 years ago

    by Carly

    Awww haha ima add you too! haha. gosh im so unsmart with this stuff. im still learning how to work it all.

    =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Carly

    Awww haha ima add you too! haha. gosh im so unsmart with this stuff. im still learning how to work it all.

    =]

  • 18 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I like this a lot its really good :D

    i wub you amanda!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I like this a lot its really good :D

    i wub you amanda!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    I really like how u ended the poem. you ended it so hat the reader was just like oh. like they get it...i loved that poem

    xoxo

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