by Lost & Delirious Jun 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Youth's a unique treasure I'm lucky to posses, |
by Driver
Wow, excellent poem... the ending question ends it nicely... well composed as well... and thanks for the comments.. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is so good! |
by Sean Allen
You ended two lines with the word 'tears', and I think you should try to replace one of them; the repitition didn't benefit the flow of the poem. |
by 111308
Am I just this sad girl crying alone in life, |
by Brook
This is really really cute..i loved it. Sad, but happy at the same time..perfect, 5/5 |