Screeching tires, broken glass.

by ForgottenLuv   Jun 1, 2006


Screeching tires, broken glass.
All because this kid wouldnt pass.

People are gathered all around.
While someones baby boy is
laying on the ground.

He thought he was okay to take
a little drive. But if hed only
used his head - hed still ba alive.

You drank that stuff at the
party to. Just think how easily
this coulda been you!!

Now some where - some how a kid
just died - if only hes picked up the
phone and ask for a ride!

So next time you wanna go out and
have some fun. just remember how
easy you life can be done!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kerry

    Yet agian you write another great poem. This time I believe that topic would be hard to write, but you pulled it off. 5/5.
    Now some where - some how a kid
    just died - if only hes picked up the
    phone and ask for a ride!
    That line tell a lot to other that read it. People that underage drink should read this. I commend you on your writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Very good choice of what to write about. You made a very important impression in my heart with this poem, it was a great message. 5/5 :)
    -Jenna xo

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