Tnx fr alwys bein der hun
it was brilliant
lve u loadz
xmwahx

I dunno why I REALLY wanted to read your poem!
I wasn't really intending to read any poems cuz I'm already sleeping in front of my pc,lol!
this poem was really amazing!!!!!!!
I loved how it rhymed and the meanings were so nice!
the unrhymed stanzas were awesome indeed!!!!
I totally love it hun & I dun regret readin it too =)
take care
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Awwwww

Aw... I think the only thing that makes this more "meaningful" (as you said what you were going for) is that, even though this isn't -your- story, you still seem to understand what the speaker is going through. Lovely write~

I love the poem and it's words are all to true for me, I'm actually going through a similar situation right now. The flow was great and the imagery as well, I enjoyed the way the poem was written and your choice of words. Excellent job 5/5

Very well written as far as free verses are concerned. The flow is nice plus its very very meaningful. Keep up the good work 5/5 doubtless