by Hanna Jun 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
*PN: I wrote this poem when my friend was in this situation and ran to my house in the rain. Please leave a comment on what you like or how I could improve. Thank you for your time. Enjoy! |
A bit short but well written....i like the style and descriptiveness of this poem |
Holy moly, that was very well written. So much emotion in such a small poem. Keep up the great work. 5/5 :) |