In Your Eyes

by Kristina   Jun 1, 2006


In your eyes,
I can see so much sadness,
And all you want to do is cry,
But instead you stay strong.

In your eyes,
I can see that you're hurt,
And that no one has been there for you,
But you pretend that it don't bother you.

In your eyes,
I can see you just want to die,
And you hate everyone around you,
But you just put on a smile.

In your eyes,
I can see that you're depressed,
And no one notices that you are,
But that's because you hide it.

Copyright © May 11, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    This poem is a little strange to me
    i get the feeling and everything but i'm not a free verse writter i have a few poems but rhyme and rhythem is my forte (sp) any way i really couldn't vote fairly becaues i was fully in to it (SO SORRY) but i did see the imagary so good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Tattoo The World

    Really good. I've tried to write something just like that and failed many times. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxtatiixox11

    Gr8 poem i love it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxtatiixox11

    Omg this is wat my bf is going thro.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    In your eyes,
    I can see that you're depressed,
    And no one notices that you are,
    But that's because you hide it.
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    Loved that stanza. Reminds me of something my ex-best friend said to me. Another really great poem though. You're a really talented writer. 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

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